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[Madness: Cipher Pol]

Well...

I'll 5 it just to keep it alive but...

It's smooth but more cut-out for a test animation. Yet it's good enough reason for NG.

Shouldn't you be working on a full-length madness cartoon?

Smashedsmurf responds:

Well, I don't know if you were on the dot net when it happened, but I just wanted to make a point to Cipher Pol (Or FogHorn755) that he wasn't wanted.

And I would be working on a full-length (Probably a tad bit shorter) madness cartoon right now, but my computer with flash crashed, so now I'm on this shitcan till my newer one is fixed.

[The MAC & PC show]

Wait a minute...

"BEFORE TO SAY I STOLE THIS

i gave all the credit to the creater in the credits "

Are you saying you 'stole' this? You should wait for the actual animator to discover this site and upload it himself, not upload it yourself. It's unfair (in a way).

Very good though, but horrible punchline.

[Unfinished episode]

Wow

That was bad.

But considering that this is an early flash, and is way, Way, WAY better than my first, I'll give you a 2/5 and 4/10.

But with your next cartoons, try animating in a different style because if you don't, you won't learn anything different and you'll be stuck at this level of animating.

[TANKMEN .5]

Excellent. Love it.

And I love the quality. Yet I found out you use a seperate program for the backgrounds. Why don't you make them with flash and keep them there raw? Wouldn't it be easier?

Any who, the extra scene was easy to find, and I laughed out loud, literately, which is a first for me with this series.

JohnnyUtah responds:

this is the first time i tried painting some of the backgrounds...you know..to mix it up alittle.

[Madness Neurosis Collab 3]

It's not bad

but it's not that good either. Seeing how there is no body to direct this review upon and it's all just little madness shorts, it's ok. But the quality of the animation isn't very bright either. Constructive criticism? None. But I don't suggest making a 4th because I found the animation very robotic. To everybody whom participated, the movements need to be more fluid, not just a movement and they stop moving until they have the audiences attention.

Good job on getting front page.

LittleLuckyLink responds:

There won't be a fourth.
Thanks for the review

[:the Composer:]

Excellent animation

An excellent view of a poor boy's life. And a great pianist (I'm referring to Jazza, if you're the one who played it). But can a pianist turn into a composer? He's been practicing piano for his whole life, then he just changes instantly.

Pinochet, you're obviously the emo one about every finer detail. That beggar loves the music and it reminded him of how he started out. If you sat out 'till the end, you's understand that the composer visit's a boy repeating his life.
The composer CAN be out, a has-been. You don't have to be a popstar for that, retard, you just have to be noticably great at something.
That HEAVY metal across the street was an example of why he isn't popular anymore. The classical music is out and heavy metal is in. That's what's taking his audience from him.
And also, I don't get what Jewish had to do with that. No offence given on that last question.

[Tetris Unleashed 2]

That was either too fast or too short.

Interesting, nontheless, that you could come up with your own wave of rules, as I didn't understand jackshit that was happening, lol.

That's good, but slow it down 'cos...you did 'spice it up', but spice it up in a way that makes sence, like new angles and such.

Good luck with number 3. 55% done you said? How much longer

[Madness Excacerbation]

Shaweet

Every last bit of it decieved me...and the music kicked just as much ass!

Great work, if this was what you were aiming for.

knnkels responds:

Ofcourse it was.